* this is the spirit of my blog, which, in spite of my best efforts, it may fail to live up to in large parts. Every journey, though, has to start somewhere. So I would still request that you read the work, which is available under the three categories ‘Fiction, Non-Fiction, and Verse‘ and make your own judgement. You could rate the work you read and/or, even better, leave your comments at the bottom of each post. The fourth category ‘Nothing Personal, But…‘ chronicles the little hiccups that make my life. I appreciate you taking the time and thank you from the very bottom of my heart. Good Day!
I am the flame
that liberates your soul
when the body dies,
fights the darkness inside.
I am the flame
that lives forever in your eyes,
ignites your desires,
breaths only to be alive.
I am the flame
that incinerates vice,
devours lies, creates when
it destroys, bless conjugal ties.
I am the flame
that lights the forest in
your mind, burns down the walls
that divide, sanctifies life.
Light a fire tonight,
and you’ll see
I’ll be the first flame
that reaches for the sky,
the last one to die.
December 14, 2009 at 12:21 AM
Very good poem.
Thanks,
DMR.
December 15, 2009 at 10:02 AM
Thank, DMR. It is always good to see a friend. I appreciate you taking the time.
December 27, 2009 at 10:03 AM
That flame to me is Knowledge!!..My take on it..a thought provoking poem….beautiful!
Ditzy
December 27, 2009 at 11:25 AM
It is. Knowledge makes us. Ignorance obfuscates our being. Know and live free! Thanks for the visit. I appreciate it.
December 31, 2009 at 6:47 AM
good one..makes me think..
December 31, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Hello Megha, I am glad it does so.
And thank you so very much for stopping by.
December 31, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Hi !!! Wishing you a fab year with loads of success!!
Cheers,
Deveika Menon
December 31, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Thank you, Deveika. Most pleasantly surprised to see you here. Not to say, pleased as punch too.
I wish you a most happy new year too, my friend. Stay good.
January 5, 2010 at 10:56 AM
First n foremost happy new year
The lines penned by u are awesome
rgds,
aram
January 5, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Thank you, Aram. Hope you are having a wonderful year too!
I wish you well.
January 11, 2010 at 9:32 AM
nice poem…gr8
January 11, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Happy New Year lil bro.
wish you the best of everything in life
may Kanha keep you safe lifelong
love
bina
January 19, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Good one! Liked it
Sanjay
January 19, 2010 at 3:59 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Sanjay. I am most happy that you enjoyed your visit here. Hope to see you again soon.
January 19, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Nice poem…. GR8 work
loverd last lin s
“I’ll be the first flame
that reaches for the sky,
the last one to die.”
January 19, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Hello Neha, thank you very much for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the post. I hope to see you here again soon. Good day!
February 4, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Howdy Big MOJO
I have been out of Sulekha for almost dogs years…. was busy doing Nothing among other things…. just now read your msg… cutting the virtual umbilical was no big deal… but did miss all the mouse and keyboard fights we had on [...] .
Hows your book coming up… think I would also pick up where I left my first chapter… problem is I can’t find the diary where I wrote the password for the file in my machine.
nice blog you got… seems like its going to be a good read.
cheers
Princess baatcheet
February 6, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Hello Princess, the book writes itself if and when I let it. So I just try to stay out of its way.
I appreciate you taking the time. Hope life is as vibrant as you like it.
February 5, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Hi… Ajit…
Glad to see you moved to the next level.
Yeah… nothing much to say… is there. Be of good cheer.
Dagny
February 6, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Hello Dagny, happy to see you here. *smiles*
February 10, 2010 at 7:08 AM
I read your blog today and I have to say that I have to agree with your husband. I see you as a feeler emotional who has intuition and feelings but facts are inconvenient things for you. You were totally unfair to him.
I can offer my help if you like. I am a marriage,relationship and sexual coach. I can tell you that a man is never as emotionally vulnerable as when he approaches his wife for sex. You slammed the door in his face. When you force a man to masturbate alone, you build resentment towards you on his part
February 28, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Hi Mojomon,
How de?
I miss u man.
Oh!Pls do not end ur life.U know that I am ur only friend who would bleed to death through all the arteries
if u do so.
Amen.
gkpsree
March 7, 2010 at 10:44 AM
gkp, i’ll believe you if you say so.
Good to see you my ‘only true friend’ here. lol
March 2, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Very Nice poem
I am your new reader and loving your writings!!
March 7, 2010 at 10:22 AM
gaurav, welcome aboard!
Glad you find your time here enjoyable. Do come back. If you enjoyed this, I am more likely to believe, you will like the rest of this blog too.
Hope to see you again.